Damn. This might just be your best one so far. By a tiny margin, sure, but still, there were a few places where I went "that's some really fine writing right there". I asked Harry to read it out for me. Wanted to see what it sounded like as an "audiobook". Perhaps I am somewhat biased given the fact that there were more male characters than usual, but regardless, the story had a really good flow, and it was really good at taking the imagination to places, including similar stories from my own memory.